The Problem of Being Too Fat
THESIS :Being too fat is commonly known as overweight or
obesity. It is simply defined as too much body fat inside.
potentially leads high risk of health problem.
Being too fat is recognized as a major factor for
ARGUMENT 2:Due to the overweight, the heart will work harder. It can lead
to the heart attack. Furthermore, obesity potentially rises blood cholesterol
and blood pressure.
ARGUMENT 3:In addition, being too fat can change the amount of sugar
in the blood. This will cause diabetes and other serous disease.
REITERATION :Beside all of that, being too fat is often avoided
by many young women. They said that becoming too fat will bother their physical
More serious studies are necessary to see the
effect of obesity. However it is clear enough that overweight is not good
enough for healthy life.