Tolong yaaaa!!!
Nama=ERS
Umur=12 tahun
Kelas=6
Tinggal di=Jalan Kemandoran delapan no.14
Hobby=berenang

My name is ERS
I'm twelve years old
I'm in grade six
I live at street Kemandoran eight number fourteen
My hobby is swimming
Dan ada 1 lagi
Ultah=20 Maret 2002
When is your birthday?
Jawab=I birthday in March,fiveteen two thousand two

Ada kata-kata yg salah gak???tolong yaa

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Maaf yang fiveteen itu harus nya twenty,dan ada kata-kata yg salah gak kakak-kakak tolong ya
My name is ERS
I'm twelve years old
I'm in grade six
I live at Kemandoran eight street number fourteen
My hobby is swimming
Dan ada 1 lagi
Ultah=20 Maret 2002
When is your birthday?
My birthday is on March, 15th 2002 ( fifteenth two thousand two)
Tolong yaaaa!!!
Nama=ERS
Umur=12 tahun
Kelas=6
Tinggal di=Jalan Kemandoran delapan no.14
Hobby=berenang

My name is ERS
I'm twelve years old
I'm sixth grade in (sebaiknya sebutkan nama sekolahnya, misalnya Elementary school blablabla)
I live in eight Kemandoran street number fourteen
My hobby is swimming

Ultah=20 Maret 2002
When is your birthday?
My birthday in fiftith March, two thousand and two.
yg salah bagiaan fifteen di rma menjadi twenty

Jawabanmu

2014-04-11T04:44:47+07:00
Klw kgak salah ya : i was born in twenty of march two thousand and two
2014-04-11T04:45:08+07:00
My name is ERS
I'm twelve years old
I'm in grade six
I live at Kemandoran eight street number fourteen
My hobby is swimming
Dan ada 1 lagi
Ultah=20 Maret 2002
When is your birthday?
My birthday is on March, 15th 2002 ( fifteenth two thousand two)

smoga membantu, udah ad sebagian yg sya koreksi